Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Leads by Grace

Leads
Direct Address Lead- Do you feel safe letting your teen go to a live music venue alone? In Austin you can now safely assume that if you let your teen go to a live music venue on their own, they will be ok. Now that most of the 200 live music venues in Austin do not allow smoking, and are more strict about selling alcohol and checking I.D’s, these places offer a safe environment to listen to live music safely.  
Contrast and Compare- Up until recently live music venues in Austin allowed smoking, and were not always careful about serving alcohol to teenagers. Now most of the 200 venues in Austin do not allow smoking, and are very precautious about serving alcohol to teens. This makes Austin a safe environment for teens to listen to live music on their own.
Rhetorical Question-   Austin has always been considered by many, “the live music capitol of the world”, but have the live music venues, always been teen appropriate? Up until recently many people argued that teens should be accompanied when going to live shows. Now that most of the 200 live music venues in Austin do not allow smoking, and are more strict about selling alcohol and checking I.D’s, these places offer a safe environment to listen to live music safely.  
--Grace Cohran

3 comments:

  1. Grace Grace your leads are amazing!! <3 all of them make me want to read what you have to say next. i really like the rhetorical question one! your amazing

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  2. I love the first two!! :D
    ~Vandana

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  3. Yo Dawg,
    I really like all of your leads, but I thougt the second one was the best(er-est)because it shows a before and after thing that I think is really nifty.
    -Randy Jackson (but really Chaaru)

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